Thursday, March 5, 2015

Problem-Solution Essay Outline

Main Problem: the widespread use of social networking platforms among the adolescents nowadays has led to their unprecedented detachment from social life, which will no doubt affect how they integrate into the society in future

Affected group/stakeholder: Youths (primary schools and secondary schools)

Agent of change:  Parents and family members, Schools

Solution 1 (already implemented): reintegration of youths into the society, more activities that will encourage one to appreciate and immerse themselves in their surroundings (i.e. camps, field trips)

Evaluation: not only allows one to appreciate the nature and surrounding, it also allows youths to momentarily disengage from the online community.

Solution 2 (already implemented but needs improvement): activities such as the ‘Phone stack game’

Evaluation: effectively allow one to disconnect from the online world and relish in moment surrounded by friends and family, thus interacting with people on a face-to-face basis

Implication/Conclusion: ‘Phone stack game may not be as effective, because honestly, we are all “too weak to play” such game. The reliance on the Internet and social media has proven to be so great that it is almost impossible for us to disengage from it. As such, it is more important for youths to realise the importance of interacting with one another of a face-to-face basis, and inculcate such practice with the help of schools and family members.

Thesis: The ubiquitous use of Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and other social media platform among the technological savvy teenagers of the 21st century can inevitably lead to the creation of an apathetic society. The depravation of social life means that youths nowadays are unable to receive social cues and interact with people on a face-to-face basis. As such, relevant parties, especially the family and schools, have to take measures to reintegrate teenagers into society to make it an inclusive place just like the olden days.

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